*does the happy dance*

[izkariote]

PC is back. I didn't lose a single file. The first thing I did when I opened this baby up, in fact, was do a double back-up of the files for school that were stuck in here while Ro-tan was comatose, the most significant of which happens to be my final paper in En101.

Now. Time to get back on track and edit everything. Funny how I'm going to end up updating my writing folder here with the supposed back-up on the laptop. And on another note for the laptop, maybe I should give it a name now, as I've bonded with it over the past two weeks. Suggestions at the moment are Blake, Savois, Charon, Aya and Yasamu. *coughs* I'm open to others though. XD

One day down, folks. Five more to go.

Comments

[menismastah.livejournal.com]

yay for joo~!

[archangel-dream.livejournal.com]

CHARON. =D Savois and Yasamu is good too.

[izkariote.livejournal.com]

Y'know, you never did get to sit down and chat with me on the final edit for Endtimes. :p

Speaking of Endtimes... I'm doing the third run for it. I'm experimenting with styles of formatting and writing it, seeing which is most popular with the audience.

[archangel-dream.livejournal.com]

XD True. They're still stuck in my head. Either I put them on post or I have time to chat with you. The latter's a little unlikely at this time.

Shucks, and I thought you're ready to publish! :) Good luck! Are you going to change some plotlines too? Coz it's the last parts I felt queasy about. Especially their similar make-up -- or at least their touching moment -- after the second time. After the first one (or the first arc), it didn't feel as good anymore. Like I'm ready to expect them go into fights, ignore each other until one of them goes terminal and the other one rushes to his side (and saves him), and then they make up again. I don't know about the other readers, but that one's a bit overdone after the first arc. If that's going to be the final ending, I hope for a bit more twist.

Hey, I just said my main point for discussion! =D The other one was about your re-usage of certain phrases such as "it would be hours before he would blahblah..." and "cool as Antartica". The first time I read them, I was impressed. The second and third times were bland. o_o

Um...is it just me or do we need to discuss more on chat? I just said 2/3 of my points! The others, I think I forgot...>_<;;

[izkariote.livejournal.com]

Switching phrases around proves difficult after 30 or so chapters, though a few re-reads will probably get rid of that.

You didn't like the ending? Kind of hard to put a twist into that.

[archangel-dream.livejournal.com]

Erm...so you can't make it different from the first arc, at least? ^^ Nobody else have talked about this? It may be just me? >_>

[ezraelandvari.livejournal.com]

If compie be Ro-tan, then lappie must be Blake-tan! He's more hi-tech. Or you could name him Trent. >D

[yukitsu.livejournal.com]

Agreed!

[hel-interrupted.livejournal.com]

>.> Yasamu-tan~ <(^_^<)^(^_^)^(>^_^)>

[lolomgwtf.livejournal.com]

<3 franz ;D